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“Senior Citizens Witness Portent”


Monday, September 28, 1998

"Senior Citizens Witness Portent"

by Rhoda Janzen

"Senior Citizens Witness Portent"

By Rhoda Janzen

I was driving with my friend the optimist

who despite her optimism had that afternoon

noticed at Ralph’s that on her shopping list

she had scribbled ground belief, and the moon,

star-like, airkissed the Hollywood jacaranda.

The unhappy geriatrics withheld applause,

sitting on what they wished was a veranda,

not the bald cement abutment that it was.

They were motionless after a matzo supper,

watching as on a stage a curse-hungry teen,

whose face was tossed like a crumpled wrapper

into our headlights and our panic of adrenaline:

he seized a bicycle and sheered it at our car.

It was one of L.A.’s casual cruelties, the faces

as from a hole punch, dispensable and sure,

the earth that roils with unnamed psychosis

just under the urban blanket we have tucked

around its bulk, the fault-finding and the path

seismic – oh, it’s been coming, it’s been sicked

on us, the six-toed nightblooming behemoth.

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